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All I Ever Wanted by EllaScout All I Ever Wanted by EllaScout
EDIT: Ooookkk, according to critics this is too small and I need to work better on antomany and the shading needs to get better and it needs to look more realistic... um I don't know if any of you know but I had to make it small for I could fit the sketch in, I like to keep to a cartoon like style, and when there isn't a source of light or shade in the picture I make it coming from everywhere. Just a little note guys, not trying to be mean but I rather explain why I might reject your suggestions.
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This I have to say, is an amazing example of your improvement. There are correct anatomy lines, and it looks like you tried very hard on this picture. I love how you did the shading and the way you made sure the collar bubbled out and that fur was aggravated in that area.

Vision: Good as it may be, it isn't perfect however I can see the great detail and effort put into the picture. You took the time to draw the freckles, the paws, the fur and even the highlights in the eyes. All in all, this is a great picture but it isn't perfect.

Originality: Out of many of the animals you see that people draw, amber yellow eyes aren't very popular. I thought this picture was very unique of it's type with design and with details.

Technique: Your technique in drawing this is great, it shows the 3D aspect in the shading, and you made the collar look like it is sticking out, which if it was on a real animal it would. You also made things that were farther away smaller than the things that were closer, so good on you c:

Impact: When I saw this is my massages, I had to click on it and view it up close. When I got here and got a chance to look at it and what it was from, it made it even more amazing.

Hope this is a good one.. this is my first.
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ReynaTheDragon Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I love it! Keep up the good work! :) (Your shading is smoother than my ugly shading. xD)
Neravirat Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow your art has improved so much!
*goes to make a really crappy Critique cause I suck at writing them*
EllaScout Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
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May 15, 2013
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